Tuesday 14 October 2014
Assigment 1 FeedBack; Learner Response
Great title and font
Other font needs checking ( slogan/main flash) needs to be consistent
celeb cut out needs work
Need more cover lines - boys?
Main flash needs text with in it.
Im going to keep working on my cover and try and make most of the fonts the same.I am also adding stuff like fifa15 and PS4 to larger the target audience.I've gotten better cut outs to match my flashes. I have also add text with in the main flash.
Great title and font
Other font needs checking ( slogan/main flash) needs to be consistent
celeb cut out needs work
Need more cover lines - boys?
Main flash needs text with in it.
Im going to keep working on my cover and try and make most of the fonts the same.I am also adding stuff like fifa15 and PS4 to larger the target audience.I've gotten better cut outs to match my flashes. I have also add text with in the main flash.
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